SageofTime
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Yes, $100.00 dollars would be my donation.
Thanks for sending the link to your new grammar-corrected website.
I took the liberty of making a few notes. Sorry I didn't get beyond the first welcome paragraphs.
"Broughtons music" should be "Broughton's music" (possessive)
as "powers being" references "Walt Disney Imagineering", it should be singular, not plural.
"their IS money" should read "there IS money"
"selling CD's" should read "selling CDs" (not possessive)
"Bruce Broughtons Theme Parks attractions' music" should be "Bruce Broughton's theme park attraction music"
"Bruce Broughton have done" should read "Bruce Broughton has done"
"are the most memorable" should read "is the most memorable" as it references "music"
"CD's in the future" should read "CDs in the future"
"to the fans whom love" should read "to the fans who love"
By the way, I LOVE the Randy Thornton donation box! What a great idea! I mean WHO can't use a little extra flow, know what I'm sayin'?!! (wink wink) Maybe you should make it a PayPal link!
what do you mean typos? i fixed them!
This coming Monday, October 8, 2007. Scott Powers at the Orlando Sentinel, will be speaking with me about possibly publishing an article on what I am trying to do, get Bruce Broughton's Theme Park music, released.
"Hi....yes....I'm Scott Powers...nice to meet you too. Who are THESE two men? Oh...these are my friends. No...don't be frightened...they're just here to help. We all want to help you. Here...take this...it will calm you down. Why don't we conduct this interview in my friend's van. It's a nice van. Oops...watch your step. Dizzy? Really? I'm sure it will go away soon. No, you don't need to tell your family where you're going. They know. They've known for a while. That's it...sleep...sleep...we can talk later."